The Storm
Entry for the "What Comes Back" Challenge.
The hall is quiet. The air is still.
The storm has washed the floor.
You promised me a brand new sky,
And swore to close the door
❤️🩹
On every slam, every scream,
On every cutting word,
Until the silence felt so sweet...
The best I’d ever heard.
❤️🩹
But if a question leaves my lips,
A simple, quiet "why?"
Then I can see the weather change
Inside your shifting eyes.
❤️🩹
The heavy clouds come rolling in,
The "sorry" starts to fade,
And once again, I’m standing in
The mess that we have made.
❤️🩹
You look at me with cold contempt,
Like I’m a debt you owe...
Or just a stone inside your shoe
With nowhere else to go.
❤️🩹
I’m stupid for a single thought,
I’m nagging for a breath,
You choke the life from every day
And talk the love to death.
❤️🩹
The "bitch" comes spat across the room,
A sharp and hateful tone,
To remind me that I’m smaller now,
And you're not afraid to be alone.
❤️🩹
You take everything so personal,
My hearts in fight or flight,
You grab your keys and slam the door
Then disappear into the night.
❤️🩹
But morning brings the gentle hand,
The soft and sorry face,
To sweep the broken glass away
And put things back into place.
❤️🩹
"I’m sorry," falls like heavy rain,
"I won’t do it again,"
But I can feel the pattern slither
Beneath your very skin.
❤️🩹
It’s in the way you hold your breath,
In how you watch the clock,
The iron key is turning slow
Inside the heavy lock.
❤️🩹
It isn’t new, it isn’t strange,
The pattern has returned,
To sit among the cooling ash
Of everything you burned.
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
I try and be active AND interactive.
I write... whatever I feel.
Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.


Comments (5)
Congratulations on all the great rhymes in here! And that dude needs to be gone. Sorry, sorry, sorry and then again😞 Good job.
Lovely, Sara. Great words and wonderful rhyme. Good luck with the challenge.
This was so SO relatable! Loved your poem!
<3 I felt this one.
heartbreaking and all too real. Thank you for sharing, and good luck.👏👏💚