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The Ghostly garden

The rule everyone knows.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished about 2 hours ago 5 min read
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Every third night of every month, exactly at 10pm, an ethereal ghost, cloaked in spectral energy, floats through the desolate, fog-laden flower garden of the town of Galloway. By day the garden is an ordinary and pleasant place for the town's people to sit and read or just meditate...but by night...scattered amongst the ancient, moss-covered petals - remnants of a long forgotten civilization mysteriously appears from an obscure past life. With it comes a magical and eerie blend of dark fantasy, atmospheric realism and haunting landscapes.

The Garden at Ten is an eagerly awaited event, with a great deal of trepidation blended in.

By day, the Galloway Garden was the gentlest place in town.

Children practiced reading on the sun‑warmed benches. Elderly couples fed crumbs to birds that never seemed in a hurry. Students sprawled in the grass with textbooks open and eyes closed. The flowers - foxglove, pale roses, lavenders and forget-me-nots...all leaned toward the light as though listening.

But as evening approached, the garden emptied with a quiet efficiency that no one commented on. People closed their books - Conversations tapered off. Even the birds seemed to know when to leave.

No one ever stayed past dusk.

It was simply understood, the way one understands not to touch a hot stove or not to wake a sleepwalker.

At 9:45, the last stragglers always drifted out, brushing pollen from their sleeves, glancing once over their shoulders. The gate clicked shut behind them with a soft, habitual finality.

And then, at exactly 10:00, the fog rolled in.

It arrived, as though stepping through a doorway only it could see. Thick, silver, and strangely luminous, it pooled between the flowerbeds and coiled around the statues whose names no one remembered.

Moments later, the ghost appeared.

It floated just above the ground, cloaked in a pale, shimmering energy that made the air echo faintly. Its shape was vaguely human, but stretched, elongated, as though sculpted from something mysterious and old. It drifted along the garden’s winding paths, pausing at certain flowers - always the same ones, though no one alive knew why.

It flitted among the petals as the fog thickened, then the remnants emerged.

Shards of symbols no scholar could decipher. Tiny metal gears fused to roots. Fragments of pottery that glowed faintly before crumbling into dust by dawn. A child once found a coin stamped with a face that was neither human nor animal, but something in between.

No one ever tried to collect these things. They simply appeared and vanished, like dreams that refused to be carried into morning.

The ghost moved with a slow, deliberate grace, searching for something it had lost centuries ago. Sometimes it paused beside a rosebush and tilted its head, listening. Sometimes it reached toward a stone bench, fingers trembling with recognition or regret.

And always, always, the town watched from afar.

From windows. From porches. From the shadows of their own doorways. They never stepped closer. They never called out. They never interfered.

Even newcomers learned quickly.

A visiting scholar once wandered toward the garden at night, notebook in hand. Before he reached the gate, Mrs. Harrow, ever nosy and seeing everything, gently placed a hand on his arm. She didn’t scold or explain. She simply shook her head with a soft, knowing look.

He turned back without protest.

Another time, a group of teenagers dared each other to sneak in after dark. They made it as far as the fence before the youngest froze, staring at the fog as though it were staring back. None of them spoke on the walk as they hurried home.

The next morning, they returned to the garden at sunrise, placing fresh flowers near the gate. No one asked why. No one needed to.

Life in Galloway continued in its quiet rhythm.

Daytime laughter. Evening departures. Nighttime watching.

And every third night at ten, the ghost drifted through the fog‑laden garden, tracing the same path it had traced for generations, stirring the remnants of something unseen.

The town never questioned it.

Some truths, some habits - were older than understanding.

And some rules- especially the important ones - never needed to be spoken at all.

.......

Eventually, a new ritual began. 'The Lantern Path'.

Every month, third evening, just before the sun slid behind the ridge, the villagers stepped outside with their lanterns. Some carried glass globes, some tin-framed boxes, some only jars with fireflies coaxed inside. It didn’t matter what kind of light you brought, only that you brought one.

Children learned early. They toddled after their parents with stubby candles, wax dripping everywhere, and no one ever scolded them for the mess. The adults only corrected the angle of the flame, the steadiness of the hand, the timing of the step.

At dusk, the village exhaled into motion.

People walked the same looping path---down the main road, across the creek, up the slope behind the mill, then back again. No one announced the start. No one called out directions. They simply emerged, one by one, until the path glowed like a slow-moving constellation.

Visitors always tried to ask why.

They would stand at the edge of the road, bewildered, clutching their unlit belongings. “Is this a festival?” they’d ask. “A ritual? A parade?”

The villagers smiled politely, the way one smiles at a child who has not yet learned the shape of a thing. They would offer a lantern...always an extra one tucked under an arm or hanging from a belt---but they never explained. If the visitor accepted, they joined the flow. If they refused, they stepped aside.

Their path was never blocked.

Once, a traveler lingered too long in the center of the road, staring at the procession as though trying to decipher a code. A woman gently touched his elbow and guided him backward. “Careful,” she murmured, though nothing dangerous was visible. He moved without protest, as if the tone alone carried the weight of a thousand repetitions.

The lanterns swayed. The creek murmured. The sky dimmed.

On the third night of a visitor’s stay, something always shifted. They would stop asking questions. They would stop looking for meaning. They would simply pick up a lantern---any lantern - and fall into step. Their posture softened. Their pace matched the others. Their silence became part of the larger silence.

And the villagers would nod, satisfied.

No approval was needed, just acknowledging that the visitor had finally understood what everyone understood. That some things are not explained because explanation would only make them smaller.

One third evening, a storm rolled in early. The clouds blocked the sky, and the wind rattled shutters. A visitor - new, stood in a doorway and whispered, “Surely not tonight.”

But the villagers were already stepping out, lanterns shielded under cloaks, flames trembling but unextinguished. The visitor hesitated only a moment before grabbing a lantern and running to catch up.

The path glowed even in the rain.

No one broke formation. The lanterns bobbed like stubborn stars refusing to be swallowed.

Later, when the visitor dried their cloak by the hearth, they didn’t ask why they had gone out. They didn’t ask why everyone else had. They only held their lantern in their lap, polishing the glass with a small, reverent motion.

As though it were obvious.

As though it had always been obvious.

FantasyPsychological

About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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